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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeMon Jan 11, 2010 2:13 am

I think it's awesome. ;D
Good job. *gives a cookie and gold star*
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeMon Jan 11, 2010 5:09 am

I don't know what you are talking about, the lineart looks really good to me.
I also love her outfit. Plaid is so cute!
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeMon Jan 11, 2010 8:15 pm

I agree with Rai, the line art looks fine. (:
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeTue Jan 12, 2010 7:11 pm

Aww thank you ^_^ it means a lot to me =D see with the lineart I know there's tons of things I could improve on, I'm not about to point out the flaws but yeh. I know it's not brilliant but it's not to bad I suppose.

And also as off topic as it is, I love how your signature has your theme tune lyrics, oh that reminds me, I need to get a move on and get the feb banner done, the valentine ones started but that's not as important as the feb one really so yeh. Thanks for indirectly reminding me.
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeWed Jan 13, 2010 4:16 am

oh the colouring is really awesome! really very well done, and lineart is pretty too, what i like the most are the eyes, they look really good
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeWed Jan 13, 2010 11:18 pm

Thank you ^_^ I like the eyes too, they were surprisingly easy, it was the hair that took the longest but that's the same with most things I do. I remember doing a picture for this thing called Imvu, it's not manga or any form of drawing, it's hard to describe what I actually did, but anyway, the hair took me 3 hours and consited of a total of 26 layers ^_^ it turned out well =)
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 20, 2010 8:21 pm

even if you have mistakes you can still adjust them. Mistakes we say don't exist just more room for improvments. She loks great though I can wait to see you add more to it.
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 20, 2010 8:54 pm

Aww thankyou, I think I'm just gonna colour it though, I tried so many times to get the shoes right, I gave up trying to do any better, I only noticed the
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after I'd pressed hard on the pencil. See first I sketch it, then I lightly do the main lines, then I press on them so that I don't have to use a graphics pen cause I suck using them ¬_¬ my lines end up 2 inches thick.

(The spoilers there cause I hate pointing out mistakes I hadn't seen until finishing it, I prefer people to find them ones for themselves hehe ^_^)
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 20, 2010 9:00 pm

The legs are glorious! I really like her outfit too. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 20, 2010 9:07 pm

Thankyou, me too hehe ^_^ really I should've changed them and added some folds to show how shes wearing jeans but I just couldn't do it to them, so instead shes wearing more legging type things *hint, hint* Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 07, 2010 5:50 am

Oh! it's a hard choice! However, I think the second one is better, because you can see all of the detail in the eyes. Maybe if you mess with the levels on the first one, you'll get more detail out of it, but if you don't want to then the second. ^^

Also, the paper folds look cool. I thought you did it on purpose! xD
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 07, 2010 6:10 pm

I like the second one too. You can see it more clearly, but the first one is good too ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Comments for Michelle Lawler   Comments for Michelle Lawler I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 10, 2010 1:13 am

Yeah ^_^ Aww thanks guys =D Your awesome. Yeah I get where your coming from ^_^. The first one I liked it because of the sort of style, the second one for the detail. My lil sis was saying she preferred the pencil-like one because you can see the hair detail better or something like that. I think I may edit the grey one a bit to try and get it to a grey I like. A more contrasted or darker grey?
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